真实案例！ChatGPT炒了我的美国员工！

这是最近发生的一个真实的案例。

我觉得招聘页面的文案写得不够好，原文如下：

Welcome to an exciting and creative workplace, where it’s the people that make the difference.

At DataNumen, we know that our success is a result of our incredible workforce—a team of talented, highly motivated professionals, working together to deliver data recovery solutions that help people when data disaster occurs. We’re passionate about what we do and who we do it for, and with that passion comes purpose.

As a team, we continuously seek new and innovative ways to meet our customers’ needs and operate our business.

Our mission is simple: make great products that help people recover their data as much as possible. Our collaborative work environment keeps us focused and collectively committed to achieving this goal. DataNumen’s culture embraces the diversity of ideas, lifestyles, professional insights and personal perspectives. We’re proud of what we do and are always looking for passionate people to help keep our business thriving.

Interested in joining our team? View our jobs below and apply today.

于是就让一名美国员工Bennett去改写，过了几天，他交出了改写后的版本：

Our workplace is dynamic and creative. We welcome you to this exciting environment where people focus on making a difference.

Here at DataNumen, our highly skilled professionals work together as a team to create success. We fully understand how difficult it is for our clients when disaster strikes. Our passion is helping our clients to recover their data so that they may limit any negative consequences of data loss. Data recovery is our passion, our purpose, and our mission.

We constantly search for new and better ways to provide value to our customers. Innovation is at the heart of everything we do.

Our goal is simple: create outstanding products that recover the maximum amount of data possible. We embrace collaboration and work together to achieve our goal. Here at DataNumen, we also support and encourage diversity when it comes to personal perspectives, insights, and ideas. We take great pride in our work and we are always looking to add new team members who can help strengthen our company.

Interested in working for DataNumen? Check out our jobs listed below and submit an application.

这个版本的缺点是比较罗嗦，原文只有162个字，结果改写以后有184个字。说明这个人对语言的驾驭能力还不够好。于是我让他再改得简洁一些。这是他修改后的第二个版本：

Our workplace is dynamic and creative and we focus on making a true difference.

Here at DataNumen, our highly skilled professionals work together to create success. We understand how difficult it is when disaster strikes. Our passion is helping our clients to recover their data so that they may limit any negative consequences of data loss.

We constantly search for new and better ways to provide value to our customers. Innovation is at the heart of everything we do.

Our goal is simple: create outstanding products that recover the maximum amount of data possible. We embrace collaboration and work together to achieve our goal. We take great pride in our work and we are always looking to add new team members who can help strengthen our company.

Interested in working for DataNumen? Check out our jobs listed below and submit an application.

简洁是简洁了一些，只有142个字，不过意思其实有点变了。原句”it’s the people that make the difference”强调是人（员工）令公司与众不同，从而凸显出公司重视员工的价值，而改后”we focus on making a true difference”变成了另外一个意思”我们专注于让公司与众不同”，变成强调公司的企业文化是让其与众不同。

我因为最近用ChatGPT比较多，所以就打算让它来试试。我用的GPT-4的模型，发给他下面的指令”Rewrite the following text, please be unqiue and concise”，并附上上面的原文。

ChatGPT给出的第一个版本是：

Welcome to an inspiring and imaginative workplace, where our people set us apart.

At DataNumen, we recognize that our exceptional team of skilled, driven professionals is the key to our success, collaboratively delivering data recovery solutions for those facing data disasters. Our enthusiasm fuels our purpose.

As a united team, we constantly explore novel and ingenious methods to address customer needs and drive our business forward. Our mission is clear: create outstanding products that maximize data recovery. Our cooperative work atmosphere ensures focus and shared dedication to this objective. DataNumen’s culture celebrates the diverse ideas, backgrounds, professional insights, and personal viewpoints. We take pride in our work and continuously seek passionate individuals to contribute to our flourishing business.

Eager to become part of our team? Explore our available positions and apply now.

我一下子就被”where our people set us apart”这句话给打动了。这是一句成语，在这里用得非常精当。再看其它部分，也写得不错。”Our enthusiasm fuels our purpose”这句虽然写错了，不过放在这个地方，立意还是不错的，“文以意为先”嘛。

我又让ChatGPT再生成一个版本：

Discover a dynamic and imaginative work environment where the people are the driving force behind our success.

At DataNumen, we attribute our accomplishments to our remarkable team of dedicated, enthusiastic professionals, united in providing top-notch data recovery solutions during data crises. Our passion fuels our purpose.

As a cohesive unit, we persistently explore inventive methods to address customer requirements and enhance our operations. Our mission is straightforward: develop exceptional products that maximize data recovery. Our collaborative atmosphere maintains our focus and shared dedication towards this objective. DataNumen’s culture celebrates a variety of ideas, lifestyles, professional wisdom, and individual viewpoints.

We take pride in our work and constantly seek ardent individuals to support our growing business. Interested in becoming a part of our team? Check out our available positions below and apply today.

这个版本里面标题罗嗦了一些，不过也还不错。最终我选择了第一个版本。

这时我就想，既然ChatGPT写得比Bennett还要好，而且几分钟就能完成，我何必要继续雇佣这个每小时125美元，还三天两头休假的美国人呢？于是，我给Bennett写了一封信：

Sorry but it seems that ChatGPT works better than you, I have adopted its work on our page https://www.datanumen.com/careers/

然后终止了和他的合同。

人工智能会代替人吗？

这是很多人在热议的话题。从我对ChatGPT的体验来看，创造性不强的工作的确有可能被人工智能所代替，比如上面案例中的这个改写的工作。不过，创造性强的工作从目前看尚无法被替代，比如，我让ChatGPT去写一段Copywriting(广告词)，结果GPT-3.5直接就把Copywriting理解为Copyright，然后乱写一气。GPT-4好一些，不过写出来的也是泛泛，不如我现在的另外一名美国员工Max，看来他的工资还是不能省啊。